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COWS AND BUTTERCUPS

  COWS AND BUTTERCUPS{West Virginia 1945 }I saw cows and buttercupsOne hot Summer’s dayDreaming on a mountain sideJust above the coal minesDown West Virginia wayI was only three. I held someone’s handBut don’t remember whoShe smelled of fresh-baked apple pieAnd walked with the breeze When sunlight fellShe carried me homeTo tell the rest waiting for usAbout the cows and buttercupsI saw that dayDown West Virginia way.  
— Geremia, Feb 20, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Ha! (I bet my Alexander was

Ha! (I bet my Alexander was cuter. He had curly platinum blond hair and big blue-green eyes!) I do so envy your knowledge of your history. There's very little of mine. My father's line dies out as there are no sons to carry the name. And I met one of my grandmothers (on my dad's side) briefly as well as two remaining sisters of my moms' (again briefly). I do remember stories from my mom's journeys and have many photos. My dad rarely spoke of anything of his past, ever. All I know is that his dad was a priest who left the priesthood for my grandmother... and his father (or grandfather, I forget) has a (now large) metropolitan city named after him. ~A
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

What a most sensed pastoral scene you evoke,

Ann of Norway Lovely, lovely thoughts, the perfumes and the thrills of the wind in her skirts billowing love and warmth towards you, your hand held tight, as you peered down at the coal mines and their slightly frightening dark colour, then being carried safely, in strong arms, home to tell the others that you had seen the golden yellow of buttercups reflecting the sun on their shiny petals, and seen the comfortable cows chewing the cud, and lowing in their gentle voices among the swaying grasses. What a most sensed pastoral scene you evoke, one we all have sensed as poets, one we hold, perhaps the dearest memory in nature, with someone who loves us, protects us and guides us, and who enthuses with the innocence of a child, at the beauty of this world, no theories or illusions veiling or exaggerating its impact on the psyche. Yes lovely carrissimmo Longobardolino mio. Annuccia
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 3 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaMany

J.B. Longo-Geremia Many Southern Italan immigrants workekd thke coal llminess of West Virginia and Pennsylvania in the early 1920's, My paternal glrandfather , Oreste Geremia, was one of them [ as well as several cousins of my maternal grandmother] We had friends who stayed, and we visited them every year The woman in this "scene" was Rose Feliz [changed from Felice] who was a best friend --she and her husband Ralph-- to m family. They lived on a farm in Clarksbukkrg West Virinia iin the 30's' and early 40's. Ralph then began to work in the coal mines in a nearby town.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Happy Rose!

Ann of Norway Not one of the nicest jobs when the sun shines on the buttercups and meadows, to go deep down under the earth and dig out coal, blood sweat and tears, tears from all the soot. But then there could be fossils in the coal seams and they can have been fascinating. I remember the town of Rochdale and others in Yorkshire, row upon row of miners semi-detached houses, grey stone, gritted from the atmosphere with so much coal about, they were depressing; no wonder there was joy when they were free from work, washed and sitting in their cosy homes contemplating outings in the meadows above, little heavens of natures expression to console them for their labours. Lucky are we who didn't have to work the mines, we undermine our lives in other ways we humans always looking at the grass on the other side of the fence! We live a life of luxury compared with the miners of those times, and we salute them for their industry. Lets have a glass of wine and toast them shall we, to those who laboured in the dark dank terrifyingly dangerous mines. Saluti! Annuccia