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So Not Fit Too Conform To

my intention is to stare you down society critque your default status quo peruse your every claimed prerequists rifle those chaches of cancel civilizations filed under unfit, moderized, or tolerable there will be inquiries, a Q and A with unrehearsed, nonprescreened Q's your marginalized attricities will face scrutiny under your own criterias all those oversights, or rationalized actions will be supenaed, and recovered from bins will you skwirm much when you are subject to a similar probing that you have assigned to so many as a price for conformity
— IKnowNoBox, Feb 19, 2010

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

I’ll have to come back to

I'll have to come back to this David. At the moment that song 'and we're made of boxes and they all look just the same' is ringing in my head. lol Judy
Mark

Mark

16 years 3 months ago

How many blastings

I wonder how many blastings it will take for those demanding to be in their own of their own to remain their own. 9/11 Remember? "You see they have no desire to compromise. They want every infedel converted to death. If we take our foot off the foot of the enemy for just a few seconds our world changes completely" (Body of Lies) Whose fault is this? Thanks David, you get me going always, Mark "I do not walk the earth and eat out of dumpsters, I'm not a bum, I'm beat."
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

16 years 3 months ago

This was a thought provoking piece

that I admit I had to read several times. It does raise questions, David. Thanks for making me think. There are more than a few typos/misspellings that need cleaning up, that I feel would make it read smoother, but thanks for sharing. Tom