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Anarchy (dedicated to all & NeoPoet.com)
I’ve walked the road of confusion,
danced the steps of freedom;
wandered many a mile of hope,
dreams, I no longer need them.
I often question my existence,
forever, it seems, searching for verve;
settling for second best,
is not what I deserve.
I try to think of a reason to smile,
but I find my face; it hurts a little.
All resolve to fight is weak,
my bones, too tired and brittle.
I sway on top of the tallest tower,
looking at the ground below;
everything looks so minuscule,
I move, but never let go.
My mind says jump, do it girl,
it’s easier than getting out of bed.
All that should be precious to me,
have become the things I dread.
However, that was some time ago,
I’m glad to say I’ve survived.
All the anarchy has dissipated.
It's Gods will that I'm still alive.
I write this poem to my friends,
and to all who are in mayhem.
This dedication is to my Neopoet liberators.
My renaissance is due to them.
Critiques
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
This is awesome !
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I just wanted to say thanks
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
((((((Rosina))))) You are
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Just wanted to thank
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Beautifully expressed as
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks Judy. Stick with
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Ahhh Rosina … I thought
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
All my achievements are a
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
love it Rosina
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
The pride is with you and
tbeaudet
16 years 3 months ago
Brilliant & Inspiring
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks so much. What’s
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Oh! Thank you so much Licia.
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Btw I forgot to say
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I’m so proud to be on the
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
You have to make more, we just LOVE your poetry.
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann… This poem is for
washing tears
16 years 3 months ago
great write!
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I’ve been down that road
Roscoe Lane
16 years 3 months ago
Terrific,
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I’m oh so proud to be
J.Thomas
16 years 3 months ago
I love this. how thoughtful
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I’ve had so much help from
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks for your comments
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
The poem is about being
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
You’re so right. Thank
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
Venus**Xena** What a
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so much for lovely
neha raju
16 years 3 months ago
very nice
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
That is my wish. I want
Orphani
16 years 3 months ago
You are a poet among your
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Than you orphani. I’m so
ifoundaplace
16 years 3 months ago
Wow Xena
ifoundaplace
16 years 3 months ago
Wow Xena
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Like I’ve said, and mean,
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Grazzi
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Your lovely comment needs no
Dustyverse
16 years 3 months ago
wow GIRL!!
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so much and
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
Speachless
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks so much…you don’t
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
HAPPY HAPPY BIRTDAY TO YOU
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Oh wow! What a birthday gift
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Is it your BIRTHDAY dear Rosina?
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Dear lovely Ann of
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Your wee glass of cider!!! Tut tut!
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Wonderful story. You sure
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Ann of NorwayOne more liitel
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I can imagine the nurse
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I’m still crying but with
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
Happy Birthday Rosina
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
So I guess it’s a double
DawningDaytripper
16 years 3 months ago
Well you wrote us a precious
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Awe shucks…you made me
Venus x
16 years 3 months ago
A Double Indeed **Grin**
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 3 months ago
you're not alone
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I’m saddened to hear what
the_fool
16 years 3 months ago
why, thank you
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
You bet the last stanza is
adjei agyei-baah
16 years 3 months ago
Good poems have always been
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so very much…I
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you…make it several
Saiko-Johnny
16 years 3 months ago
Loved it!
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I’ve had a few years of
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
What is an anarchist?
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Anarchy