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WHITE FALLING IN LOVE
"White Falling in Love"
white falling
white light
white weddings
white fright
such beauty
such wild delight
such suchness
in muchness
in darkest night
so softly
so silently
one upon one
on each patch of ground
on each little mound
tumbling down
from the trees crown
like love from above
its beautiful weight
that lunges
and plunges
to settle its fate
its the stars
not the flakes
that fall in the night
the Stella d' amore
so tender
so bright
yet their apex's sharp
add the sting
to this love
such a wonderful
wonderful thing
in our life
yes it hurts
yes it stings
it pulls sensitive strings
repercussion in its swings
round its harp shaped notes
of pure bliss
and who would think
that all this was the kiss
of the snow
now so white
so pure
oh will it be there in the spring
when the sun with its warmth
has begun
to destroy
the source of my joy
with its heat
all the neat piles of snow
those crystals will flow
in the streams of life's patterns
with minnows and whales
in the sea
to be melted
become
a part of the whole
this beautiful
wonderful
mystical humanity.
Critiques
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Trips off the tongue and
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
You’re such a romantic at
Neonfilm
16 years 3 months ago
Ann, the poem pulls you like
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you Neonfilm!
Geezer
16 years 3 months ago
Falling in Love...
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann
tbeaudet
16 years 3 months ago
Your words fall
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
That was the idea.
Proprietress o…
16 years 3 months ago
white
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
I caught sight of your face my Proprietress
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
I’ve head quite enough of
Ink Dragon
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann,