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Geremia
Geremia
Feb 11, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

WANDERINGS

  WANDERINGS I see myselfIn the falling sunOf a cold Winter’s nightMy eyesLike stars in a magenta skyQuiet and stillIn a frozen stare. I see myselfIn a warm ocean breezeFlying freeAway from careInto  the light that fantasyAlways brings to me I see myselfOn a bright Summer’s dayLingeringAlong a country roadIn the warmth of childhood dreamsWandering and wonderingWhat is ahead of me.  
— Geremia, Feb 11, 2010

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Wafi

16 years 3 months ago

Thank You!!!

"I see myself In a warm ocean breeze Flying free Away from care Into the light that fantasy Always brings to me" How soothing! You touched my soul with these words. Shutting my eyes to fly... Thank You!!! Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

If only, if only we could fly my Longobardolino!

Ann of Norway With the golden windows of the dawn we take flight into our imagination and free ourselves of any hindrances in life, for a moment, just for a moment, spirit, air, the magic of the bird, tossed in the wind, drawn up from the confines of the earth on the rising thermals, gliding like the albatross across the surface of the waves, warmed by the sun, happy. I am learning and shall come Annuccia.
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

This is lovely...

It's a wonderful way of expressing what you see. You only see light even in the dark. Rosina xena465
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Oh, beautiful songbird of my

Oh, beautiful songbird of my soul, if only we can fly.... I to you.... You and I.... far from this veil of tears.... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkcCGjLlsTI ~ Wish I could fly. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkcCGjLlsTI ~ Walking in the air.