CRUCIFIXION OF ANOTHER KIND

CRUCIFIXION OF ANOTHER KIND There are those hurts that neverSeem to endAnd linger in the soul foreverThe first cut so deep so sharpIt stuns the sensesAnd tears your world apart There are those deeds cruelAnd unkindThat carry you to dark placesNothing is ever the same againAnd you areNo longerWho you were. Sharp turns and jagged edgesDark corners and lost innocenceSo many places for a heart to bleedAndFor you to dieSo many timesIn agonyOver and over again.Crucifixion. of another kind.

— Geremia, Feb 08, 2010

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Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

Amen, Brother!

Been there, done that, and didn't buy the Damned T-shirt! You said it all quite profoundly with this great write! I applaud this one wholeheartedly!

Geremia

16 years 4 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThanks,

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thanks, Lonnie. Sorry you've been there, BUT it is good to know you are not the only one. Joe

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

In a strict sense, I wish

In a strict sense, I wish that no one would know that, yet some perverse side of me feels good to commiserate. It's genetic I think. Predisposition to misery. (I wore THAT t-shirt long enough and I know how pain does alter the chemistry.) Longo, if I may stretch myself into areas that are none of my FN business..... we only have one life, the one we live in the present, grab every bit of happiness you can. No use in hanging from any tree, that just adds more to the misery d'jour. Love, Anna

Geremia

16 years 4 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThe

J.B. Longo-Geremia The dopamine made me do it...:) I guess shit happens-- but I need time to b reath in between! Love f rom Joe

hippiepoet69

16 years 4 months ago

thumbs up

I don't use stars. I tried giving the shirt off my back. But no one wanted that shirt. So I keep it hid in my closit with my skelitons. Keep writting. It helps, I know. huey

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Very Nice Longo

Hoping your doing fine and loved this one. Sure makes one think or not think. LOL You just compile all of those beautiful writes of yours because I will be the first to buy it! Would love to have one Longo. Blessings friend Magics02

whitescatter

16 years 4 months ago

good writing..you could make

good writing..you could make readers to relate in a way that they feel they were the ones who made that poem...just keep it up.. Jasfer Kerguelen "THE MOCKINGBIRD"