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Geremia
Geremia
Jan 18, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Narcisse

NARCISSE

 

 

You are the cream in my coffee

 The apples in my apple pie

 The joy in my Almond Joy

 You are my inspiration 

The reason for my being

 The lyrics of the songs I sing

 The ecstasy of my d reams 

You are purity and sensuality

Charm and seduction 

The image of Plato’s perfection

The Adam of Creation

A god of the Nordic  kind

Another Paris of Troy

You are all I want
All I need

 You are what I see

 In my own reflection

 

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— Geremia, Jan 18, 2010

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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

At it again?

Looking in the mirror at your rugged good looks, lol. I tell you what Joe, this is a terrific poem and read. How true is this of many. Well written and a pleasure. Always, Love Lyz. XX
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 4 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaGosh! I

J.B. Longo-Geremia Gosh! I think i am blushing...:) Love from joe as always Do they make mirrors that don't break? Hmmmm.... I 've got to look on Amazon.
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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Ha ha.

More smiles for me today. You can blush all you like lovely, put a bit of color in those cheeks, and maybe they do make unbreakable mirrors, in my case, hope not, lol. You take good care dear man. Love and smiles, Lyz. XX
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

BALDER THE BRIGHT AND THE BEAUTIFUL,

You god, you great god of Narcissism you're the snake in my lake the sausage in my stew the plumb in my pudding the sauce in my style... no, I am just enjoying some rubbish I don't wish to offend . Wow no wonder.......!!!!!! I saw something in those eyes but ........well.................let me see! I am just wondering what Plato's perfection is, I must to the net. Then the Nordic god which one, it MUST be BALDER THE BRIGHT AND THE BEAUTIFUL, We just hope that Loki isn't hiding anywhere in your flat or you might be in for it with the next salad leaf!!! SMILE!! Well if you can't love yourself then you can't love anybody else. But perhaps you don't want to anyway. One's company two's a crowd, but that's not quiet right now is it. No you win, you are. True love from Annuccia. XXXXOOOO
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Great one again Longo

I love your style of writing and your words of charm, love and grace. Keep them coming and watch your steps in the house Longo. My Italiano friend. Mona