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TWO EGGS FRIED DEEP IN OLIVE OIL
TWO EGGS FRIED DEEP IN OLIVE OIL
[Grandma’s kitchen: 1948
In loving memory]
I watched her mesmerized
As she fried two large eggs
Deep in olive oil.
Then
She placed them tenderly
Between two slices of American white bread.
Second mistake.
A culinary clash of cultures
At my expense
There was little I could say.
It was grandma’s kitchen
After all
And those were her ways
But you see
That was my lunch for that day.
All she placed wrapped in newspaper
Deep in a small brown bag
The ones she saved from the local grocery
No sooner through the iron school door
My prison
I felt the eggs slip to the floor
From the bag they did escape
I thought God had saved me
From a greasy fate
A severe stomach ache
An enema and castor oil
Mamma would have been hell bent
That was her cureall.
Handed down from generations
The rest is childhood history
Those eggs fried in deep olive oil on American white bread
Meant a lot to me.
I knew how much love and affection
Went into that small brown greasy bag
I loved you grandma
You knew that.
But
Wherever you are cut down on the fat!
Critiques
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
We all have to cut down on
Geremia
16 years 4 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaSo true,
docmaverick
16 years 4 months ago
Hey, Joe....
Geremia
16 years 4 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThanks!
Geremia
16 years 4 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThanks,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Joe, this is
Geremia
16 years 4 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaI have the
seabhac
16 years 4 months ago
Lovely tribute to a dear lady
Geremia
16 years 4 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you.