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TWO EGGS FRIED DEEP IN OLIVE OIL

TWO EGGS FRIED DEEP IN OLIVE OIL

 

 

 

[Grandma’s kitchen: 1948

 

 In loving memory]

 

I watched her mesmerized
As she fried two large eggs
Deep in olive oil.
Then
She placed them tenderly 
Between two slices of American white bread.
 Second mistake.
A culinary clash of cultures
 At my expense
 There was little I could say.
It was grandma’s kitchen
After all
And those were  her ways
But you see
That was my lunch for that day.
All she placed wrapped in newspaper
Deep in a small brown bag
The ones she saved from the local grocery 
No sooner through the iron school door
 My prison
 I felt the eggs slip to the floor 
From the bag they did  escape
I thought God had saved me
From a greasy fate
A severe  stomach ache
An enema and castor oil
Mamma would have been hell bent
That was her cureall.
Handed down from generations
The rest is childhood history
Those eggs fried in deep olive oil on American white bread
 Meant  a lot to me.
I knew how much love and affection
 Went into that small  brown  greasy bag
I loved you grandma
You knew that.
But
Wherever you are cut down on the fat!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

— Geremia, Jan 12, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

We all have to cut down on

We all have to cut down on the fat of life and live simpler imo Joe Loved your memory I have one of my nana that sticks in my mind always ... maybe ill write it someday ;) love and biggest hugs your Jayne-Chloe x x x
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 4 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaSo true,

J.B. Longo-Geremia So true, my Jayne. I moved to a smaller place as my diseasaed progrssed and my income lowered. Much happier... Love from Joe
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Hey, Joe....

...that's a heart warming story, and it flowed pretty well. I enjoyed reading the meloncholy attitude of your spirit. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Joe, this is

Joe, this is so......poetically appetizing. And the irony is (some time ago) I watched a program about cholesterol studies completed in an Italian village inhabited by some pretty cast-iron stomachs, generations upon generations. It seems that everyone had an extremely low level of bad HDL. And high good HDL. Fishing/fish were a staple food. Hugs to grandmas everywhere, where would we be without 'em? (That includes me, btw. ;-) Love, Anna
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 4 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaI have the

J.B. Longo-Geremia I have the same cholesterol "set up". It must have been the olive oil--the enemas and the castor oil [both straight up :) :):) ] Love f rom Joe
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 4 months ago

Lovely tribute to a dear lady

I liked the mood of this ..poignant and thoughtful but even your imprisonment at school gave no bitterness in your words. Lovely Seabhac