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Jan 05, 2010
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Matter's of the Mind
Matter of factly nothing comes free
real challenges become harder to find
A blind poet in need for all to see
creating emotion within confines
Nothing we feel can be a simple line
or ever learned with out some earned life
Dancing upon the pages confines
words plucked from a black-hole of strife
My Playground littered with sharp knives
each with it own disclaimer attached
Jump at your own risk, beware of the lies
and remember to not light your own match
Passion burns as a will beyond divine
Lessons learned, is Matter of the mind
Julie
D.D.
1/4/10
Spenserian Sonnet.
10 syllables per line.
ABAB BCBC CDCD EE.
real challenges become harder to find
A blind poet in need for all to see
creating emotion within confines
Nothing we feel can be a simple line
or ever learned with out some earned life
Dancing upon the pages confines
words plucked from a black-hole of strife
My Playground littered with sharp knives
each with it own disclaimer attached
Jump at your own risk, beware of the lies
and remember to not light your own match
Passion burns as a will beyond divine
Lessons learned, is Matter of the mind
Julie
D.D.
1/4/10
Spenserian Sonnet.
10 syllables per line.
ABAB BCBC CDCD EE.
— DawningDaytripper, Jan 05, 2010
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Breakinglogic
16 years 5 months ago
:)
DawningDaytripper
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks Logic, I am sure,
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
I like it too...
DawningDaytripper
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks Gee. Hugs and kisses