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Final Peace

 Here's to a world without war
A toast with glasses half full
Children needn't wear glazed eyes
Here's to a world without lies

Imagine breathing fresh air
Can we fill our hearts with smiles?
What if we didn't know spite?
Imagine living in light

Someday our doors won't need locks
And strangers will speak like friends
Love will not come at a price
Someday good health will suffice

Here's to a world full of life
Imagine smiles that don't fade
Someday we'll learn to share
Here's to a world where we care
— Breakinglogic, Dec 29, 2009

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Silent_Rain

16 years 5 months ago

Wonderful!!!!!!

This is a wonderful poem Logic!! I wish the world was like that of the one ypu wrote of!!! If ever there is a world so pure, I thank you for it!!! Thanks so very much for sharing this beautiful and ispirasional poem!!!! From one poet to the next, ~Rain~
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BrightEyed

16 years 5 months ago

amazing

beautifully written. its the sound of hope. i love it. here's to a world with out lies. :)
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Brilliant one

Logic you did a good thing here and a great chat host last night. Kudos to you my son.. love magicmum