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Journy to the streets (an adventure of the mind we took in chat, sakk led the way)
SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:06 pm: SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:06 pm: It starts with a walk to a sidwalk full of cracks. Early to the morning light so ware your coat. Wish to come or perhaps you would just walk away.
[breakingLogic] 9:07 pm: ill get my coat
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:07 pm: No matter as I will go if even alone on this December day.
[Live]: weirdelf has left at 9:07 pm [Live]: weirdelf has entered at 9:07 pm [Live]: weirdelf has left at 9:07 pm [Live]: weirdelf has entered at 9:07 pm
[breakingLogic] 9:08 pm: i see efl braught his coat as well
[weirdelf] 9:08 pm: of many colours, of course
[breakingLogic] 9:08 pm: brittany, are you coming?
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:08 pm: Were are in the city and have nothing to our name. The time we are to spend is to just learn how to remain.
[weirdelf] 9:09 pm: A little dance to confirm my bearing, proves I’m lost so now I’m swearing
[breakingLogic] 9:09 pm: a grey city then with a spot of elf we embark with each only ourself
[Live]: Korcy Fifthrig has entered at 9:10 pm
[weirdelf] 9:10 pm: hey Korcy
[breakingLogic] 9:10 pm: a rock we stumble, it speaks!
[Live]: NicoleNeonHeart has left at 9:10 pm
[Korcy Fifthrig] 9:10 pm: wola
[breakingLogic] 9:11 pm: we appear to be in spain
[Korcy Fifthrig] 9:11 pm: i wish
[weirdelf] 9:11 pm: I speak granite, marble and obsidion, but this rock wants to speak of oblivion
[breakingLogic] 9:12 pm: come, join our trip, just a quick left into your mind is where we embark
[Korcy Fifthrig] 9:12 pm: what pebbles are we castin’
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:12 pm: The walk is important as we are to split and here a sign I made from a box for each of you to take. It sayes only that I’m hungry and in need of help. You should stand in a well open place. With many people to look your way. At least you will be safe. Its ok as I love you and will come to your need if any fool playes in your time spent to live out the day.
[breakingLogic] 9:12 pm: this rock is not but rocky or korcy if you will, a clever disguise, he aims to kill
[Korcy Fifthrig] 9:14 pm: and does it depart by sling as in david or does it crush as in quake
[breakingLogic] 9:14 pm: my sign is well worn for i’ve been cold long, few if a stangers dare come along and bid a coin my way, often not
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:14 pm: On this day you ware a different pair of shoes one from the trash I found for you. No not to place a look as in my mind yours were sad and well these are happy they are free.
[breakingLogic] 9:16 pm: my shoes collect dirt which shapes to my feet good thing because these shoes were all flesh
[weirdelf] 9:16 pm: I am free if somewhat encumbered / apparently give by Sak’s mentor / or perhaps found in a fever / While I unrestfully slumbered
[breakingLogic] 9:16 pm: dirty shoes and dirty footprints to match show where ive been in the past
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:17 pm: As we walk to the intersection we are to find another that is to play the sad game of life. He is large and well has spent a lot of time on the street. So as a soldier not a man I walk ahead of you both and make a stand. We are lucky as I needed not to take his life. So now we are on a jurnyof simple life.
[weirdelf] 9:17 pm: our prints behind us obscured like a burning bridge, leadiing ghostfully into the grey [
breakingLogic] 9:18 pm: the man is enticed by our way of life, he quickly joins wihtout strife
[breakingLogic] 9:18 pm: i believe he said his name was rocky? my friend?
[weirdelf] 9:19 pm: a brother of the streets we learn and teach, what can harm us while each is in reach
[Korcy Fifthrig] 9:19 pm: hard is he, but not his feet as ugly concrete attacks beneath
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:20 pm: On this day we road anothers wave of poor and cold and hate. Yet now the cold is to play in our way and we need to sleep and get somthing to eat. The day has done well as between the three of us we have enough to perchace a burger and then well we have our coats nothing more yet nothing less.
[weirdelf] 9:21 pm: I shiver, show a little dismay, these streets I know, its here we grow, but I prefer to frolic and play
[breakingLogic] 9:21 pm: the three are as follows, our past, our present and last, what follows
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:22 pm: Magic it is your turn to watch the night so here take my shank. If you are in need just wake me and then run to the light. I willbe to play the fools game as life on the street at times can be hard.
[Korcy Fifthrig] 9:22 pm: and splash in puddles that are pools of faces, passing their time, going other places
[weirdelf] 9:23 pm: those three march not in a line, they are part of each other, its not hard to divine, closer than brother, an eternal one weirdelf sleeps, trusting, unencumbered
[Korcy Fifthrig] 9:24 pm: joined by need, seperated by seed, but always in the mood to feed.
[breakingLogic] 9:24 pm: a shank guesses at danger does it not? let us be armed together, strong we to be aught
weirdelf stirs and smiles, in another place, its magic briefly lights his face
[Korcy Fifthrig] 9:25 pm: and wield our blade for a right of passage, for the night is young but the dark is savage
[breakingLogic] 9:26 pm: a hunger we have, of seed we are, we plant a bow in a large rat
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:26 pm: We awake at dawn as the cold has made us slow. Now to play the game agian or we will starve and freeze. We find a hollo in a trash ben and remember the reason we came on this place of sadness of men. We saay never agian yet cry as we hold eachother tight. Only to say I’m sad now and well I will walk my own way back to my car. Asking God to watchover the poor as I have now a place to understand the reason the truth. The need of people to find thier way to another place.
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:27 pm: This was a different walk I took you on and I hope you understood.
[weirdelf] 9:28 pm: a voice comes out, tho his lips never move, “rest friends and let me prove, we are protected by a magical shout (and an electronic motion detector)”
;[breakingLogic] 9:28 pm: sakk, i understand. this walk was different then the math inside words
[SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK] 9:28 pm: Well said Logic
. [weirdelf] 9:29 pm: A small smile crosses my lips, well led, sir
[breakingLogic] 9:29 pm: then bid all goodnight. a trip indeed lost to the night and eaten by moths
Critiques
Breakinglogic
16 years 5 months ago
This is the fun we have in
vinton
16 years 5 months ago
AWWW man! I’m sorry i