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Dec 14, 2009
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Earthfoot Slothfulness
Putting my virtual hand into the rabbit-hole
Grasping at slippery images
Fondling soft meanings
Brushing up against wayward words
There is no way to describe the journey
And completion of mind-melds
In spaces where no man has gone before
Just a surgeon, cutting away the dead issues
Tribble is...The Captain isn't discriminating
The first officer on the scene
Is an infant in human emotion
Having only half a chance of understanding
The complex puzzle of the human heart
I am not sure that logic is represented on board this ship
I have left known realms and embarked upon
The ultimate trip...
Communications are garbled
But I have engineered a warped drive
To take me home and rescue my sanity
— Geezer, Dec 14, 2009
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Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
G, Gee… I love this
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
Do You Really?
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Gee … I have been
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
I think you have...
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
No, I am not...
Breakinglogic
16 years 5 months ago
You bet Im represented on