Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

The Prayer of an Orphan Child

The Prayer of an Orphan Child

Silver clouds  silver clouds

Will you play with me as a  mate?

As an orphan,

none is there to play with me.

Ivory moon. My Sweety

will you kiss me to bid good night?

As a motherless child

to remember Her love.

Jasmine buds ,Jasmine buds

Will you smile in morning times

to stay in your beauty and

to keep your smile always

Chilly breeze My Darling!

Will you raise me from my bed?

to enjoy the sweetness of  dawns and

to pray Him for giving my thanks


— SAKTHEEE2007, Dec 11, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

More from this author

Critiques

Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

16 years 6 months ago

I love your poem because i

I love your poem because i can relate, i was once an orphan. I believe the title was very appropriate and your poem accurately depicts how an orphan feels.