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THE ANGEL'S KISS- revised

THE ANGEL’S KISS

 

I felt the fire
Of the Angel’s kiss
Desire
Burning across my lips
Androgynous ecstasy
Of Death's bliss and fury
Wings dark and cold
To the touch
Begging my Soul
To give in
No beat of a heart
Did I sense
Within
Orgasmic Finality
Letting go
To a seduction
I’ve never known.
— Geremia, Dec 02, 2009

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 6 months ago

Horrific, powerful and wonderful at the same time.

The sensations of dying if only, if only, and not any of the more terrifying and dramatic ends we already know of. If this could be the manner in which to die, why then it is preferable. And yet the blackness of this angel is eerily potent and dominating - a kiss of fire, burning across your lips awakening such desire-bliss mixed with fury-how to evoke this sensation from our memory of sensations is complex for the mind. Wings dark and cold oooo that is definitely possible to feel and they with magnetic power in them, drawing out of your 'soul' its beating heart, again reminding one of the Aztecs and their pulling out of living hearts ouch! And the final mysterious release, fantastic write this one. Wow you will have us all shuddering, in tears and laughing, no I mean something else, in love and hate personified as one, one whole devastating, beautifu, mysterious end like the cacophony of a modern music piece where the whole orchestra crashes about like drunken clowns before the dreaded stunning sensation of dead silence. You stunned me my Longobardolino, totally stunned me. Your Annuccia shaking.
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 6 months ago

Yes

J.B. Longo-Geremia This was a good one, Annuccia-- if I may say so myself.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 6 months ago

You may, you may indeed say so!

My Longobardolino, yes that's exactly what I thought too, Alsidig- having many sides to it, and in fact all qualities, and at the same time illustrating your helplessness in the face of unwanted discomforts, to put it mildly!!!!!!!!!!!!! Still stunned Annuccia. "Angel's Death Kiss"- possibly?