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Dec 01, 2009
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PARALLEL WORLDS
Parallel Worlds We wander throughParallel lines dissectingVerticallyHorizontallyParallel plains connectingDimensions One, Two and ThreeParallel worlds standingIn a row waitingYet to see.Shackled and chainedBy this Time and SpaceFlesh and GravityThe Soul The SpiritEnergyKnows only dimension Threelonging to flyFreeTo dimensions fourFiveSix or more JustA sigh awayNo more tomorrowsNo more todaysHeaven's blissInfinity.
— Geremia, Dec 01, 2009
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Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
I’ll meet us wherever
Geremia
16 years 6 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYou bet.
Geremia
16 years 6 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaWell
Nordic cloud
16 years 6 months ago
This is an incredible poem, absolutely incredible,
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Joe
Geremia
16 years 6 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,