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PARALLEL WORLDS

Parallel Worlds We wander throughParallel lines dissectingVerticallyHorizontallyParallel plains connectingDimensions One, Two and ThreeParallel worlds standingIn a row waitingYet to see.Shackled and chainedBy this Time and SpaceFlesh and GravityThe Soul The SpiritEnergyKnows only dimension Threelonging to flyFreeTo dimensions fourFiveSix  or  more JustA sigh  awayNo more tomorrowsNo  more todaysHeaven's blissInfinity. 
— Geremia, Dec 01, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

I’ll meet us wherever

I'll meet us wherever bliss happens, intersecting, dissecting and resurrecting the eternal dance. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 6 months ago

This is an incredible poem, absolutely incredible,

This is an incredible poem, absolutely incredible, its cross-lined parallel patterns shooting through consciousness like beams of understanding, levels of rise and fall; like the left behind edge of a lake where the lines of the passing seasons leave their mark, parallel because of gravity and yet not because of the shapes they meet round the lake. The lake itself on a plane lower or higher, always parallel to itself (at least to our eyes as we live on a round globe!!) sinking and rising to create new shapes in ever changing dimensions, not ever static, in flux, commenting the myths that man thinks he has deciphered from the movements of nature. Often we live each in our groove of life, chosen, "the narrow way", never seeing over the wall we have built to insulate our minds from temptation and diversity, so many do this with their lives and with their blinkers on only see one dimension, when there are 'mangfoldig' possibilities of planes to explore. Ah this life we lead, it is up to us individually to find our 'way', our creed of conduct and irrespective of any religion in order to have a FULL life and feel fulfilled in it. For those who are religious, that side has been illustrated so very perfectly here by this Catholic inspired bard who still sees the symbols hovering in his subconscious mind. My Longobardolino, you excell, I love it, Annuccia.
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Joe

Woah !! this one sent my tired 3am mind into a spin ... wonderful poeming of late dear man Love and hugs Jayne x x x