A FAMILIAR ENTITY

A FAMILIAR ENTITY At timesI think I seeA shadow next to meA familiar entityLong goneAnd lonely At timesI think I hearA voice whisper in my earA familiar tonalityI know from long ago At timesI think I recognizeA haunting melodyA song sung to meMany years before At times I wonderIfThe eternity we faceIs no holy placeJustA sigh or twoAnd thenOne step across the room

— Geremia, Nov 30, 2009

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Longo

Eerie yet enchanting. I really like this poem. Well written. Love Lyz. XX

Geremia

16 years 6 months ago

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you my Lyz. Send my love to our friend in Australia.

Nordic cloud

16 years 6 months ago

A times

At times I feel I know what you mean, at times I do. at times you lift the curtain/drapes and send a different view, at times you fill the shadows of our minds, revealing light, at times we sigh with you in pure delight, at other times so sad, at times like these we feel akin, life's flow coming in from air you are, were there, yet not. Annuccia

Geremia

16 years 6 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaTu sempre

J.B. Longo-Geremia Tu sempre leggi la verità indietro questa mia poesia....

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

This, imo, is YOUR poem.

This, imo, is YOUR poem. You have even surpassed yourself. Bow. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

Geremia

16 years 6 months ago