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magics02
Nov 27, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Whispering Winds

The whispering winds, how they talk to meof men and women how could that be?I feel the winds upon my face,gracefully drifting about this place.I hear the flute, the harp and the waves,as the whispering winds take to the stage. I think of men, women and children too,I pray the wind guides them through.Whispering winds of sheer delight,On winds of prayer I pray tonight.
I raise my head to the sky above,Thanking my dear Lord for all His love.I wish I could share some of your heart,to pray with you,  when the winds depart.The whispering winds, how they talk to me,and how I pray,  Lord watch over thee.

Feel  the winds that swirl all around.
 For what you may need may finally be found.For in that mighty gust of wind,You will find yourself,  a way to mend.The whispering wind will soon still the air,And shall leave you still standing there.  
— magics02, Nov 27, 2009

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W.C.Wampler

16 years 6 months ago

...winds..poem

Magic, Nice wind poem. I too let myself hear the natural voices that the wind and the water carry with them. Thank you for asking to be a buddy here. Welcome to my list....wcw
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 6 months ago

Magic. To start the

Magic. To start the title I think was well placed. The language use was in line yet to the middle of it I was lost from time to time. Perhaps just my gray working to hard. The rythm was fine as I looked to try understanding. Yet I write the slam bam of life. So who am I to judge the line. To speak of the theme. I say well done and yes extreem. The srart was like many I have read yet the end was worth more than I needed as I to stand to a place wondering what will come next. You asked so what the heck I said what I thought nothing more and nothing less. Steven A. Kacer
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you

Yes thank you and maybe I need to rephrase the words what part did you get lost and I so appreciate your input. See you on chat. Magics02
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you Jayne

I went ahead and changed some of your edits and how does it sound now..I think much better..it was late at night when I was doing this one..not written down just the thoughts in my head rolling around with the wind outside. thank you xxoxoxo magics02
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Silent_Rain

16 years 6 months ago

Lovely Poem...

Love this poem magic... It speaks to your soul... I love the wind and love to hear the voices it carrys... Sent with love... ~Rain~
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

MIssed you tonight

Thank you rain and I missed you on chat. It was a long day today. I will talk to you again dear friend of mine.. xoxoxo Magics02
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

Buffeted about you are here

Buffeted about you are here with the winds and the waves of life, your spirit of compassion with your fellow men in full swing and beautiful, even though I do not share your beliefs, you tear us up with the verve of your thoughts and dance with us and we enjoy the dance and respect the sentiments so positive and delightful, yes this style I like oh magic one. This too I must look at closer again! so long for now with love from Ann of Norway
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Sweet and thank you

Wow someone that has touched my soul..you got it right on the money dear Ann..thank you from the bottom of my heart.. Love Magics02
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Whispering Winds

Mona I just love the elements The winds send me messages of delight whether they are gentle or raging in the storm I just love to be out in the elements receiving the energy be refreshed. Beautiful I have written many poems on the Earth Sea Sky Maybe My Blue Butterfly will make you feel serene Electric blue