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Nov 11, 2009
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THE ARTIST: To my sister--edited
THE ARTIST [To my sister]
Fantastic journeys rushingTo places unknown.Shocks of color,Lightening forms.What is it that she knowsThat we don’t knowBringing us to realms Of beauty
And
Insanity
The razor's edge
Of .magic and Imagination.The holy litany of geometry.
Reality in abstraction.Lyrics of her soul.Her EnergyStilled in space.In time.For all of us to see.Immortality.
— Geremia, Nov 11, 2009
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Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Fratello, Joe.
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYou are
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
For us all to see. Immortality.
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYes. Well
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Longo
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaMy sister