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FIELDS OF LAVENDER: English AND French versions

FIELDS OF LAVENDER

 

A Memory

 Lavender waves
Purple and blue
Swaying lazily
In the wind of a Summer’s day.
I walked alone on that country road
The one that led to Avignon.
The fire of the Mistral
Broke the morning chill
As it swept over the lavender hill
From across the African sea.
Alone I walked
Just fields of lavender and me.
Soon I sensed the nearness of
An angry Rhone raging through
The smells of city decay
Not so very  far away.
A stone gate  led me to
A different world
I never knew.
Fields of lavender
Still come to me
That Summer when I was twenty-three,
A memory where  I quietly sleep
Peacefully
In lavender waves 
Purple and blue.

 

 

 FRENCH VERSION

 

 LES CHAMPS DE LAVANDE

 Les champs de lavandePourpres et bleusA chaque coté d’un vieuxCheminOù je marchais sous un soleil de matinJusqu’à   la ville d’Avignon. Le froid du jour naissantFut brisé  par le ventD’un Mistral violentVenant du desertDe l’Afrique du nordA travers la mer de la Méditerranée Seuls les champs de lavande et moiNous faisions chemin ensembleMon Coeur souffrait de la nostalgieD’être dans un paysInconnu.
Où je  me sentais triste et perdu. Passant le RhoneQui courait avec rageDessous le pontQui menait à ’AvignonJe laissais avec r egretMes champs de lavandeQui accompagnaient ma solitude.
Et dansaient avec  moi jusqu'à la cité Il y a longtemps que je les a vusCes champs poupres et bleus.Mais souvent ils viennent m’embrasserDans mes rêves des temps passésEt je me rendors comme si j’étaisEncore parmi ces amisQuiSoulageaient  ma nostalgieEtSoulevaient mon triste esprit  
— Geremia, Nov 05, 2009

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

As it swept over the lavender hill

Oh Longobardolino, you take us to places of magic where we can feel happy. "In the wind of a Summer’s day." "The fire of the Mistral Broke the morning chill As it swept over the lavender hill From across the African sea." "Alone I walked Just fields of lavender and me." "In waves of purple and blue." One of those moments in your life when all cares or worries leave you, as the perfume of the lavender covers all. The sun baked earth, the winds and clouds take over and your whole being is swept up in the experience of the now; made so indelibly purple-blue in your mind, that now even we are privileged to take part in your feelings of joy, of the joy of living in this world's wonderful nature, its beauty, its flow, past papal Palaces, under bridges, all symbols of our myths made to shine in your words so beautifully, beacons of enlightenment and understanding. Your admiring Annuccia with love. It reminds me of the nursery rhyme:- "Lavender's blue, dilly dilly, lavender's green, When I am king, dilly, dilly, you shall be queen."
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

Oh the French, the French,

Oh the French, the French, it is so full of je ne sais quoi, sigh! We are seduced by the romantic feelings that arise from that language, what is it that fascinates us so? Perhaps one is concentrating on the words even more than when reading one's own language, or is it that the music that is subtley felt coming with a language foreign to us adds another dimension to the reading? I do not know, or in English 'I know not' has some of this whatever-it-is in it doesn't it! We have romantic spirits we writers of poetry and are easily won over to the rhythms and rhymes of the words sung in another language. You know so many languages so well that maybe you have become blasé about such feelings and dimensions that conjure up what I mean? They have become commonplace perhaps? "Mais souvent ils viennent m’embrasser Dans mes rêves des temps passé" I guess its just the musical sounds that are there in all languages. No? I enjoyed the music of this 'song.' Ton plume de pourpre nous seduire. Your 'henrykt' Annucia
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

I love fields of lavender,

I love fields of lavender, French, this poem, U2, and your conversations. ~Anna "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
L

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Longo

I love Lavender and the romantic french language, The heady scent lavender. Do not know how to read french. But this poem and a memory at 23 is a memory that should be cherished in a poem as you have done. I am jealous. Lol. XX
OM

odd molly

16 years 7 months ago

Dear L. Your poem is very

Dear L. Your poem is very lovely. Yes.. nothing is more beautiful than the vibrant blue and purple coloured fields of lavande that are to be seen in Provence. I loved both versions of your poem. love. o molly
OM

odd molly

16 years 7 months ago

Lavenderit lies a mist of

Lavender it lies a mist of sights within the blue strokes of lavender that spring has concealed and in the eyes of the anemone a wonder meets that rests there hidden like a whiteness of stretched fields a question that cannot be answered but lives in the spirit of the earth to awaken to times that will come into dreams about strokes of lavender
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 7 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThis

J.B. Longo-Geremia This beautiful poem deserves five stars !!!!! "Strokes of lavender...." Wonderful! Longo
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Joe

First off I am so sorry I missed this one the first time round its just wonderful... congratulations on evolution love and hugs Jayne x x x
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 6 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThis was a

J.B. Longo-Geremia This was a true experience when I lived iin Avignon. Love and good wishes to my Jayne from Longo.
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Joe

I am soooo jealous I have always wanted to visit Avignon and the Palace of the popes ... its just sooo steeped in history ... you know my mother is French ? lol love and hugs Jayne-Chloe(my full name ;))
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 6 months ago

M y Jayne-Chloe

J.B. Longo-Geremia When you are feellng up to it, go to Avignon. You will find a way to make it work. London was my dream---and I went two years ago. UNFORGETTABLE!!! Love Joe
M

magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Lovely

Hello Longo I have to say that lavendar is my favorite scent, always has been and I can smell it in your poem. very nice piece of work I shall say.. Magic02
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 6 months ago

this is so lovely & sweet & light, a darling dance in memory & r

Nice to see you here, this is so lovely & sweet & light, a darling dance in memory & reflection, I enjoyed it, thank you. Lavender waves Purple and blue Swaying lazily In the wind of a Summer’s day. I walked alone on that country road The one that led to Avignon. The fire of the Mistral Broke the morning chill As it swept over the lavender hill From across the African sea. Alone I walked Just fields of lavender and me. These lines were so rich in imagery & lovely & subtle Cheers Anni~ "When we feel love and kindness toward others, it not only makes others feel loved and cared for, but it helps us also to develop inner happiness and peace". H.H. the Dalai Lama