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Nov 03, 2009
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ICY WATERS
ICY WATERS Icy watersPure and cleanRushing down a mountain streamSparkling diamonds in sunlightOver shards of rock and stoneFurious in their fightTo reach their goalInto Ocean’s or River’s deep.Melting peacefully into OneWhere they sleepEternallyNever to return from where they come.The Soul.
— Geremia, Nov 03, 2009
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Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Ah would that we knew!
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Just LOVELY my Longobardolino,
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYou have
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
From the mountaintop of
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaVery well
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Longo
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you.