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Touched the Quick
You have touched the quick of my heart
from whence is born the art
of poetry
enhancing all that is
in rainbow hue
with mysterious glow
and like the coat of snow
its magic cover spread
on all the pain and troubles in your head
and body
wedded to the whole
its vows of peace
of joy within another's heart
is fixed
no longer parted lips of red
they meet
fast like the wick
that feeds a dynamite bomb
the fires of passion lit
spreads through from head to feet
and all is set alight
the lights of great desire
begins to long for air
and find it in each other's breath
is consummate
Share life's great sacrifice of claim
no longer virgin birth to blame
but all consumed
blessed
sensed as great as that of awe
as in the heavens we adore
so wide
so wild
so natural
a flight of mind
love's bonds entwined
the vine of all fine wines,
their birth
gives cause to mirth so wonderful
so bold
so whole,
so far beyond the farthest star
deep in the recesses of the womb
life stirs
what magic then is this
this bliss
this disregard for caution
this act whose actors are
the coming generation
I collapse in the now of it
I die in it
I am no more an I
but goddess
of the why of it.
Critiques
W.C.Wampler
16 years 7 months ago
touched...poem
hugo la rosa
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ann of Norway:
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Princess Ann Of Norway
Proprietress o…
16 years 7 months ago
so bold, so whole...
orgami
16 years 7 months ago
fallen is the dark entrance the steady of the damp
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Ann,This is just
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Big Smile congratulations on
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Oh golly I'm here am I ?
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
wonderful
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
Brava
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Io sono molto felice Il mio Longobardolino
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaBut
seabhac
16 years 7 months ago
Toving Ann
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 7 months ago
... but goddess of the why of it