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Oct 19, 2009
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SIMPLICITY
SIMPICITYI came to this earthOn this Fall dayMany years agoCaught my breathAnd here I amAnd here I stayUntil the dayMy breath is taken from meBy some UnknownAndUnkind Entity.ThenBack I go from where I came.What simplicity.The end.
— Geremia, Oct 19, 2009
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Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Beautiful simplicity and that is what life really is
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Happy Bithday?
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaIt was
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Longo
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,