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Oct 16, 2009
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ANGELI
Angelì [Italiain version on FORUM]
Do you see me
Silently
Breaking through the morning mist.
Across fields kissed by Winter’s chill.
Now I stand under your window
Never far
Always near to you.
Angelì do you hear me whisper your name.
Do you hear me cry.
I don’t remember
When did I die.
Angelì
Do you see me still
In our son.
In his eyes. In his smile.
In the gold of Nordic lands.
I wait for you my Angelì.
When your day comes
We will dance together
You and I
Across a diamond midnight sky.
I will show you the way
Angelì
To Heaven’s realm.
To Eternity.
[Inspired by tales told to me by my Calabrian grandmother]
Angelì, Angelì
Do you see me
Silently
Breaking through the morning mist.
Across fields kissed by Winter’s chill.
Now I stand under your window
Never far
Always near to you.
Angelì do you hear me whisper your name.
Do you hear me cry.
I don’t remember
When did I die.
Angelì
Do you see me still
In our son.
In his eyes. In his smile.
In the gold of Nordic lands.
I wait for you my Angelì.
When your day comes
We will dance together
You and I
Across a diamond midnight sky.
I will show you the way
Angelì
To Heaven’s realm.
To Eternity.
· Angelì – pronounced ON-GEL-LEE
· Nota bene: Many Southern Italian peasant women of the early 20th century were generally iin arranged and disillusioned marriages. No romantic novels to read for escape. Only tales of undying love. This “poem” is dedicated in reality to my paternal grandmother’s sister, Angelina, who lost her husband – and only true love—during the Great War. Married at 16 and left with 3 young children in 1917 in the harsh mouintan regions of southern Calabria [La Sila]
— Geremia, Oct 16, 2009
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jabuu
16 years 7 months ago
wonderful
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
Yet, I have known many
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaSad for
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Joe
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaI was,
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Molto sensibile faccia con amore (!)
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
Sono scene vive questi tempi
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Beautiful
Geremia
16 years 7 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you