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Oct 10, 2009
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THE SWAN II
THE SWAN II
I saw a swan make its way
Gently across a mirrored lake
Soft and quiet waves in its wake.
I wondered at the fluidity of motion
The ecstasy of grace..
The dream of calm and tranquility
No ghosts of memory to haunt its days.
No affliction
No sins to steal its gait.
Innocence.
And
When it knows its Time here is at an end
Across the lake it silently glides
Again
Dancing with a falling sun
Into oblivion
On this crispy cold Fall day
I saw a swan make its way
Gently across a mirrored lake
Soft and quiet waves in its wake.
I wondered at the fluidity of motion
The ecstasy of grace..
The dream of calm and tranquility
No ghosts of memory to haunt its days.
No affliction
No sins to steal its gait.
Innocence.
And
When it knows its Time here is at an end
Across the lake it silently glides
Again
Dancing with a falling sun
Into oblivion
— Geremia, Oct 10, 2009
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Nordic cloud
16 years 8 months ago
My swan, your majesty
Geremia
16 years 8 months ago
J.B.
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Longo
Geremia
16 years 8 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,