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Oct 06, 2009
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LIKE A FLAME
LIKE A FLAME
Of Nature’s fury
Flickering in its coming mortality
And so longing to survive
My soul falters in its passion
To stay alive
In a body frail and languishing .
The only life it has known
Afraid to face Eternity alone
I feel my flesh
My body fires with desire
And I endure not to end.
To go on in this place
Stopping Time
My Spirit clinging to its space
Of pain and pleasure.
Never to let go.
But
We win our battles
And lose.some
The war will end.
One day soon
So it is
I will have to give in
Like a flame dying in the wind.
Like a flame fighting the winds
Of Nature’s fury
Flickering in its coming mortality
And so longing to survive
My soul falters in its passion
To stay alive
In a body frail and languishing .
The only life it has known
Afraid to face Eternity alone
I feel my flesh
My body fires with desire
And I endure not to end.
To go on in this place
Stopping Time
My Spirit clinging to its space
Of pain and pleasure.
Never to let go.
But
We win our battles
And lose.some
The war will end.
One day soon
So it is
I will have to give in
Like a flame dying in the wind.
— Geremia, Oct 06, 2009
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Critiques
Geremia
16 years 8 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaHello
Nordic cloud
16 years 8 months ago
You take my breath away.
The Silent Saint
16 years 8 months ago
...
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 8 months ago
A Familiar Plea
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
As long as passion remains,
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Longo