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FROM PLACES DEEP

FROM PLACES DEEP  From places deepDeeper than the unknownLurking in  dark corners  of my mindShadows of yesterdays cruel and unkindBy Memory’s touch are free to roam.A fury rises to haunt my today.My heart once warm to the wondersOf this God’s World and Nature’s wayNew beginnings and no endSuddenly turns to stone. I pass through this time and spaceAlone.No place for faith.No lyrics to sing.I wander in my own complexityAs I face eternity’s sting.There are no priestly prayersNo liturgyNo magic incantationsNo witcheryThat can release me from the holdOf my own  reality cruel and coldAs shadows from deep insideTaunt my spirit and bleed my soul. 
— Geremia, Oct 01, 2009

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Longo

Another beauty in this write. I know it is a sad piece but it is done beautifully. I wish I could wipe all your woes away by saying you are not alone, but if only it were that easy. You have a talent to evict some of your pain into your poetry, so I hope this eases your pain a bit. Remember though, even if we are miles apart, we on this site consider all, friends, so my friend, you are in our thoughts always. Lots of love from Lyz. XX
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 8 months ago

Deeper than the unknown

Dear tormented Longobardolino, How deep can that be? Wow! Your ability to describe your plight is so wonderfully illustrative we are full of admiration for your industry. You almost bleed our 'souls' too with your words, but you write it so well we will willingly be bled with you. Your Annuccia