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Sep 17, 2009
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BLOODLINE II
BLOODLINE II From my father I learned the Mediterranean senseOf loyalty to familyNo matter what.From my mother I learned enduranceTo harsh realityNo matter what.From both a sadness I had never knownWhen they were gone.I am the sum total of all those who went before me.My idiosyncrasy favors one .Genetically I see who I amEnduring my own historyAnd Alone now facing my singular mortality.I am the last carrier of the flameSlowly fading into darkness.Who will be here to remember themAnd love them still when I am gone.I wonder at this mystery.The unforgiving silence of Infinity.I wonder what it means to beAnd then slip away into Eternity. Amen
— Geremia, Sep 17, 2009
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lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Longo
Geremia
16 years 8 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you
themoonman
16 years 8 months ago
Joe...
Geremia
16 years 8 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,
Lonnie
16 years 8 months ago
An interesting and impressive Poem!
Geremia
16 years 8 months ago
Thanks, my friend