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Sep 15, 2009
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BLOODLINE
BLOODLINEI’ve lost my power and graceButNot my honor and dignityAs I suffer my own mortalityAndThe singular complexity of my nature.The chosen one am I of the threeLost in the hold of heredity.Betrayal of a bloodlineOf mind to body.But then you seeYou all live in me still.The Beast has come to meFor the final kill. BY WAY OF EXPLANATION:1.My mother and her two brothers died from the effects of different forms of Parkinsons.2.“The three” =I and 2 siblings. They are ok. .
— Geremia, Sep 15, 2009
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Nordic cloud
16 years 10 months ago
Wonderful wonderful poetry
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Sigh. Who knows these
Joseph J. Breu…
16 years 10 months ago
RE: BLOODLINE
Geremia
16 years 10 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaI was
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