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Sep 14, 2009
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FEARFUL ASSYMETRY
FEARFUL ASSYMETRY
Strange and fearful asymmetry this
Life’s unevenness.
Free choice and retribution
Predetermination and Freedom of Will
Until
We sin for being human.
Evil for good
Treachery for innocence.
No sense to the Golden Rule.
Fools
Are we who fall into ironic misconceptions
Enduring pain and suffering
For
Promises of a divine resurrection.
To exist is to be
And die a hundred times or more
In this Life.
Rising from our ashes
We are our own creation
And when our final darkness falls
No regrets
No recriminations
Amen
— Geremia, Sep 14, 2009
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Nordic cloud
16 years 8 months ago
Oh super just super Longobardolino mio
Geremia
16 years 8 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYes, they