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Sep 12, 2009
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I WONDER IF ELEPHANTS PRAY-revised
I WONDER IF ELEPHANTS PRAYI am a wondrous member of humankindThe best of His creationsI possessA heart, mind, spirit and soul.
The latter a matter of distress.
Have you seen a spirit or a soul of late.
Subject of an unsettling debate.
I am a creature who can feelJoy,. pleasure, pain and dread.And like all humansI know how to mourn the deadYet it is true that elephants mourn too.Who is to sayOn their hinds trunk piercing the heavens and skiesThey don’t pray to some elephant divinityWith the most admirable simplicity.I think we humans think too much.Gifted with linguistic articulationAnd the ability at rationalizationOverwhelmed am IBy all this human responsibilityI would rather be dumb as a jackass and shrewd as a foxLive in peace out of my existential box.Grow old not knowing .Accepting Nature’s wayAnd when it is time fade peacefully awayAs elephants do. In dubito, fides[In doubt ,(there is ) Faith]
The latter a matter of distress.
Have you seen a spirit or a soul of late.
Subject of an unsettling debate.
I am a creature who can feelJoy,. pleasure, pain and dread.And like all humansI know how to mourn the deadYet it is true that elephants mourn too.Who is to sayOn their hinds trunk piercing the heavens and skiesThey don’t pray to some elephant divinityWith the most admirable simplicity.I think we humans think too much.Gifted with linguistic articulationAnd the ability at rationalizationOverwhelmed am IBy all this human responsibilityI would rather be dumb as a jackass and shrewd as a foxLive in peace out of my existential box.Grow old not knowing .Accepting Nature’s wayAnd when it is time fade peacefully awayAs elephants do. In dubito, fides[In doubt ,(there is ) Faith]
— Geremia, Sep 12, 2009
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lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Longo
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Yes, Lyz
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Longo, the title is
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Thank you,Anna
orgami
16 years 9 months ago
Like the motto
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Thanks, my friend
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
it is death in life that is so hard to face
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYou have
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Hephalumps.