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Sep 06, 2009
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NOT POETRY. JUST A PASSING REFLELCTION
NOT POETRY JUST A PASSING REEFLECTION I wish I could hear your voice againFeel your smile.At least for a while.I wish I had known the songs to singTo make it easier for you.I tried to keep the “Beast” awayButThere was little I could doMonsters always win the dayIt seems.Safe only in our dreams.Godless irony.I saw the knowing beyond the madnessIn your eyesI tried to soothe your fears with lies.You knew.Now it is my beginning and my end.The Beast has taken hold of me.Strange answer to this our mystery. You see, mamma,I am of the three closest to you geneticallyAnd so, after all this time
You quietly live in me.
Your destiny has become mine.
You quietly live in me.
Your destiny has become mine.
— Geremia, Sep 06, 2009
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Yvonne D
16 years 9 months ago
Nice!
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Thank you...
themoonman
16 years 9 months ago
Longo...
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Thanks, Richard
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Oh dearest you, in your dismay you create poetry
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Epic, no....