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NOT POETRY. JUST A PASSING REFLELCTION

NOT POETRY                                                                                                             JUST                                                                                          A PASSING REEFLECTION I wish I could hear your voice againFeel your smile.At least for a while.I wish I had known the songs to singTo make it easier for you.I tried to keep the “Beast” awayButThere was little I could doMonsters always win the dayIt seems.Safe only in our dreams.Godless irony.I saw the knowing beyond the madnessIn your eyesI tried to soothe  your fears  with lies.You knew.Now it is my beginning and my end.The Beast has  taken hold of me.Strange answer to this our mystery. You see, mamma,I am of the three closest to you geneticallyAnd so, after all this time
You quietly live in me.
Your destiny has become mine.

 
— Geremia, Sep 06, 2009

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Yvonne D

16 years 9 months ago

Nice!

A tender tribute. Heartfelt. Thanks for sharing it. Yvonne
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 9 months ago

Longo...

I only wish there was something profound I could say or do that would keep the Beast at bay... helpless we are it seems to our endings, we all face them and for many it is like riding a roller coaster that is speeding to its untracking. peace and love for you sir Longo Richard
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 9 months ago

Thanks, Richard

J.B. Longo-Geremia I guess it is what it is, and we learn to enjoy life's most prosaic moments. joe
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 9 months ago

Oh dearest you, in your dismay you create poetry

Oh dearest you, in your dismay you create poetry from your heart, knowing more than any reader, or onlooker what you are really expressing, knowing, oh knowing more than we can ever grasp, imagine, or see, I sob and in sobbing send rivers of fresh waters and fresh air to my so dear friend over the oceans, I send them in the clouds of emotions that well up in my heart on reading this poem of yours, oh Longobardolino what epic did you read that can compare with this epic of your own life? Annuccia.
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 9 months ago

Epic, no....

J.B. Longo-Geremia Just part of the human comedy, vero? Sei molto gentile, Annuccia. Il tuo Longobardolino