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Aug 30, 2009
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Limbo
LIMBO
Lingering in a place I don't know
A spirit lost in limbo
Srtange begiinings
No endings.
Pushed forward by Life's eternal winds
Never losing hope to see the light
Promises to those entering their last night.
I feel death's's chill constantly
Strong of heart and mind but not body
Yet my soul is my divinity
I survive doing the best to stay alive
Languishing in the grips of my own mystery
Soon to be part of history.
Lingering in a place I don't know
A spirit lost in limbo
Srtange begiinings
No endings.
Pushed forward by Life's eternal winds
Never losing hope to see the light
Promises to those entering their last night.
I feel death's's chill constantly
Strong of heart and mind but not body
Yet my soul is my divinity
I survive doing the best to stay alive
Languishing in the grips of my own mystery
Soon to be part of history.
— Geremia, Aug 30, 2009
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Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Linger longer Longobardolino
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Grazie.Annuccia
Janice Pearce
16 years 9 months ago
Limbo
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Longo. I wish I could
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Oh powerful and fine.
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Life's delight
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Thank you, cara Anna..
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Hi
Geremia
16 years 9 months ago
Thank you, Lyz