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Aug 30, 2009
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Limbo
LIMBO
Lingering in a place I don't know
A spirit lost in limbo
Srtange begiinings
No endings.
Pushed forward by Life's eternal winds
Never losing hope to see the light
Promises to those entering their last night.
I feel death's's chill constantly
Strong of heart and mind but not body
Yet my soul is my divinity
I survive doing the best to stay alive
Languishing in the grips of my own mystery
Soon to be part of history.
Lingering in a place I don't know
A spirit lost in limbo
Srtange begiinings
No endings.
Pushed forward by Life's eternal winds
Never losing hope to see the light
Promises to those entering their last night.
I feel death's's chill constantly
Strong of heart and mind but not body
Yet my soul is my divinity
I survive doing the best to stay alive
Languishing in the grips of my own mystery
Soon to be part of history.
— Geremia, Aug 30, 2009
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Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years 11 months ago
Linger longer Longobardolino
Geremia
16 years 10 months ago
Grazie.Annuccia
Janice Pearce
16 years 11 months ago
Limbo
Geremia
16 years 10 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Longo. I wish I could
Nordic cloud
16 years 10 months ago
Oh powerful and fine.
Geremia
16 years 10 months ago
Life's delight
Geremia
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you, cara Anna..
Geremia
16 years 10 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,
lyz
16 years 10 months ago
Hi
Geremia
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you, Lyz
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