LOST AGAIN

LOST AGAIN

Do you see me

Do you know who I am.

It seems I'm lost again.

Hardly a shadow flickering in candle light.

Just a ghost passing in the night.

Forgotten

Abandoned by the dreams I had

Betrayed by imagined realities

Fantasy's hope and visions of bliss.

A lonely road I walk now

Like shades in Shiloh or in Hell

Searching for the way

But lost again.

— Geremia, Aug 03, 2009

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

I like it's soft meandering.

Such a melancholly write Longo, but somehow light, I mean not too burdonsome on a reader, a good thing (forgive me it's late, not so articulate when tired).... I like it's soft meandering. Take care Cheers Anni~ ` "Those who dwell among the beauties & mysteries of the earth are never alone or weary of life" ~ Rachel Carson Writer/conservationist

Geremia

16 years 10 months ago

Grazie mille, Anna!

J.B. Longo-Geremia and so I softly meander through another difficult transition in my life.... joe

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Lost again ...

Joe this is poignant and sad it made me cry to be honest ... beautifully sad but I loved it .. love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

Diatom Shells

16 years 10 months ago

yes it reminds

yea it reminds me of a flatline of emotion but not of a robot nature but more of peaceful nature. silent but loud great work! -diatom shells

Nordic cloud

16 years 10 months ago

Do we ever know where we

Do we ever know where we are, I wonder? This is beatifully put and so full of feeling as the above say we feel with you, each word telling in this poem. Are you always betrayed, surely not? Your Annuccia