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Geremia
Geremia
Jul 23, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

MEDUSA'S TOUCH

MEDUSA’S TOUCHCreeping creatures crawlingFrom under sweet and gentle wordsCaught in the serpent stareAgain.Stunned by the tongue of sensualityAndMesmerized into throws of orgasmic realityFurther into passion’s hell I did descendAgain.ThenFire  to iceOnce done with meFrozen by the mask of falsityI seeMy soul slowly surrender
to Medusa’s touchAgain.   
— Geremia, Jul 23, 2009

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Lonnie

17 years ago

Intriguing and Inspiring!

Love the subject, fantastic title, extremely well-thought-out! You've captured the very essence of what it feels like to be locked in a tumultuous relationship, and deserve the five stars! Kudos!
Geremia

Geremia

17 years ago

Thank you!

J.B. Longo-Geremia Life experience makes the best poetry.... joe

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