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Jun 29, 2009
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I trusted her...
I trusted her...
I let her in,
I warned her not to let it begin.
I told her I loved her,
Let her know I cared.
I...
I put down my guard.
I left myself bare,
I thought that she was real,
I let her know how I feel...
I gave her my heart,
She returned it with a thousand darts.
I trusted her...
I let her in.
She said she wouldnt give up on me,
She told me to follow my dreams,
She loved
that I cared about humanity.
Couldnt understand my insanity.
Why dont I see what a great person I am??
I am as vulnerable as a baby lamb.
I see the beauty, the pain, the hate.
I see the death, the life, the good, the great.
I even see the love, the shadows, the truth, the lies.
I see the cry of the dove, the gallows, and
the trust that dies...
We our surrounded by deciet and glory,
overwhelmed with our own painful stories
But I trusted her...
I let her in.
I told her I'd be there,
Both a lover and a friend,
Slowly my pain was coming to an end.
I trusted her...
I let her know.
She knows the secrets that,
made my heart so cold...
She brought flame and mad a fire,
my heart was burning with desire...
I believed it could be!
That it could happen to me!!
A passionate love of my very own,
instead of the dysfunction I have known!
I opened up, let her inside,
In her I would confide.
I trusted her...
I let her in.
This pain I feel,
I don't know if it will leave.
I trusted her...
She made me believe.
I DONT trust, it's how I survive.
I'm tired of getting hurt,
So I dont even try...
She came into my life,
She opened my eyes,
I thought why not
give love another try?
I told her I was damaged...
I was honest from the start.
She said she loved me,
I had a big heart.
My tears fall faster than rain,
With my big heart,
comes big pain.
I trusted her...
I let her in.
Never again will I trust
Somebody that much
My wounded heart
can't be touched.
I loved her with a passion deep inside
Once again my warm heart
becomes cold with disguise.
Now I'm broken an insecure...
I was just longing for something pure.
I feel like such a fool
I broke my biggest rule:
I TRUSTED HER....
I LET HER IN....
I let her in,
I warned her not to let it begin.
I told her I loved her,
Let her know I cared.
I...
I put down my guard.
I left myself bare,
I thought that she was real,
I let her know how I feel...
I gave her my heart,
She returned it with a thousand darts.
I trusted her...
I let her in.
She said she wouldnt give up on me,
She told me to follow my dreams,
She loved
that I cared about humanity.
Couldnt understand my insanity.
Why dont I see what a great person I am??
I am as vulnerable as a baby lamb.
I see the beauty, the pain, the hate.
I see the death, the life, the good, the great.
I even see the love, the shadows, the truth, the lies.
I see the cry of the dove, the gallows, and
the trust that dies...
We our surrounded by deciet and glory,
overwhelmed with our own painful stories
But I trusted her...
I let her in.
I told her I'd be there,
Both a lover and a friend,
Slowly my pain was coming to an end.
I trusted her...
I let her know.
She knows the secrets that,
made my heart so cold...
She brought flame and mad a fire,
my heart was burning with desire...
I believed it could be!
That it could happen to me!!
A passionate love of my very own,
instead of the dysfunction I have known!
I opened up, let her inside,
In her I would confide.
I trusted her...
I let her in.
This pain I feel,
I don't know if it will leave.
I trusted her...
She made me believe.
I DONT trust, it's how I survive.
I'm tired of getting hurt,
So I dont even try...
She came into my life,
She opened my eyes,
I thought why not
give love another try?
I told her I was damaged...
I was honest from the start.
She said she loved me,
I had a big heart.
My tears fall faster than rain,
With my big heart,
comes big pain.
I trusted her...
I let her in.
Never again will I trust
Somebody that much
My wounded heart
can't be touched.
I loved her with a passion deep inside
Once again my warm heart
becomes cold with disguise.
Now I'm broken an insecure...
I was just longing for something pure.
I feel like such a fool
I broke my biggest rule:
I TRUSTED HER....
I LET HER IN....
— EyeZ street geist, Jun 29, 2009
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