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A Battle To Remember
As a new sun rises
Old memories crowd
A wandering mind
Tears fall like rain drops
As a victory is yearned
From an inner enemy
He has many names
Call him depression
Or even Mr. Anxiety
How he creeps up
In the quietest of nights
No law can protect you
From his unending reign
Sweat crowds your palms
As they shake uncontrollably
Your heart races as you try
To defeat a strong negativity
Hope becomes a broken glass
There has to be a better way
Oh this will not be accepted
Smiles will be worn in public
Even if the pain is unbearable
Slave to this unleashed demon
For how long can one be?
One must be stronger than the
Devil who taunts relentlessly
No longer shall one be titled a fool
That lays at the mercy of another
If he wants an unchallenged fight
Well it will be a battle to remember
Critiques
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
16 years 11 months ago
Well placed words
Morgana Tragic…
16 years 11 months ago
Hey Paul, Another great
Rett
16 years 11 months ago
Ah now Paul
weirdelf
16 years 11 months ago
Terrific poem paul, possibly your best ever.
orgami
16 years 11 months ago
poem brought me back to High School
Darby Cain
16 years 9 months ago
get rid of the Mr.
weirdelf-test
16 years 8 months ago
oh honey! you asked for it.