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Jun 16, 2009
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ONCE I WAS - revised
ONCE I WAS…
Once
I was the lyrics of someone’s song
The magic that made dreams
I was fantasy and imagination
I was ecstasy
The passion of my heredity.
The Spirit in another’s soul.
But nothing is forever
That’s the nature of this world
A temporary condition
A brief state of mind
Blind to the reality
To who we really are.
Tears of a dying star.
A momentary magnificence of Creation.
Lost in our own being.
Floating in the confusion of irony.
Never understanding.
Playing to the last scene.
No applause.
A murmur of whispers barely heard.
Melting into the velvet shadows
Of our own mystery.
— Geremia, Jun 16, 2009
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Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Joe,
Geremia
16 years 11 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Awesome
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Joe