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JUST BRIEF VIGNETTES

 JUST BRIEF VIGNETTES  What is it that you think you see Lingering scenes of someone’s energy Now far beyond. No haunting this. Loss of consciousness In our ultimate metamorphosis. No one stays behind Just brief vignettes Lost in space and time. Shadows on the wall Spirits dancing in moonlight. Fantasy that’s all. Reality of this kind Is not for us to know. What we really see Is Silence's deafening tranquility. No visions these. What is gone is gone And we too move on.     
— Geremia, Jun 05, 2009

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Geremia

Geremia

17 years ago

Thank you

J.B. Longo-Geremia It is a "haunting" melody-- kind of. :) Joe Longo
themoonman

themoonman

17 years ago

Joe...

It is haunting... what we think we see... spirits moving in shadows lingering memories we can hear or think we do in our haunted minds in our receptive spirits in our moving on... for others to see the lingerings of us... you are in tune with a higher walk and I feel empowered as well as humbled by writes such as this... great write Joe...
Geremia

Geremia

17 years ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaRichard,

J.B. Longo-Geremia Richard, you read me better than I read myself and always hit the mark so eloquently. I thank you for that. Joe