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Jun 03, 2009
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FANGS
FANGS Gripped in a circle
Fangs dark and deep
Whirling aimlessly
In a circular sleep
Bleeding souls
Spirits gone astray
Twirling round and round
In a cosmic play
The magic number
Three
Our Trinity
Birth, Death, Infinity
Clever Puppetry
Fangs dark and deep
Whirling aimlessly
In a circular sleep
Bleeding souls
Spirits gone astray
Twirling round and round
In a cosmic play
The magic number
Three
Our Trinity
Birth, Death, Infinity
Clever Puppetry
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— Geremia, Jun 03, 2009
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ANC1996
17 years 1 month ago
Woah Dude,
Geremia
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
The Maelstrom
Geremia
17 years 1 month ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaBut we are
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Ah there's the rub
Geremia
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Kelsey
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