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SOMEONE'S CHILD

SOMEONE’S CHIL


If I knew yesterday what today would bring
I couldn’t have changed a thing
Always taken by the moment
Pulled by life’s flow
Looking back with wonder
Wandering into regret
Yet
This is who I was
This is who I am
Lessons learned not easily
Hardened by the serpent’s touch
Prayers for forgiveness
Never did much
Here I stand in time and space
Sublimely soon erased
From history
Still
The child of someone
Loved by some
And then by few
An existential breathing function
A singular energy
Free
Wating
To storm the gates of heaven
And
Ravage the halls of hell

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
— Geremia, Jun 01, 2009

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D. Lee-Aseng

17 years ago

THE COMPLEX

You expand on the complex nature of the way life does as it will with a person, it twists, it detours, and it has its own agenda. You state the lack of control a person has within the maze of life; yet you divulge that a person DOES have control over life if only it is accepted as it is and as it comes their way. This is a complex theme and you succeeded in expanding on it simply, as well as maintaining the integrity of poetry. That's not easy. I commend you on that! Dianne
Geremia

Geremia

17 years ago

Thank you, Dianne

J.B. Longo-Geremia You explained it clearly. Something I have been thinking about .... Grazie Joe