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Geremia
Geremia
May 29, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

SUBLIMATION

SUBLIMATION Across oceans deep Rivers wide Over golden plains in foreign lands Mountains high I fly like an eagle to catch my d reams Imagination and Fantasy sublimate reality Heaven is not a place It is where our soul escapes To linger in Time To wander in space We fly To catch our dreams Leaving all behind        
— Geremia, May 29, 2009

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Geremia

Geremia

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you, Annuccia...

J.B. Longo-Geremia ...for appreciating what some call my "poetry". Just thoughts and reflections, yes? Duemila grazie anocora Il Longobardolino
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 1 month ago

Yes philosophical thoughts

In some ways like the Japanese Haïku, little perceptions of reality expressed with few words containing the essence of the message precisely contained and perfectly beautiful.
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poewriter58

17 years 1 month ago

Longo

The one line that stuck with me is "heaven is not a place....." this is so very true nice write Chrys

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