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above Khabul

Morning brings flagged streaming eucalyptus leaves
blown and clumping ends of branches,
green swept waves tossed to greener shores,
fearsome rubbing sounds of wind
as sibilent as sand on beaches whipped.

Blue grey front marches to the north
with low hugging bath-matted clouds,
dawns pink scudding scouts race ahead
signal no work, rest day instead.

These last acres of netting can stay hunkered down
above the orchard,
this lee side of the town,
clipped, secure, taut, remaining bound
resisting storms upward pull
to spiral skyward like huge spinnakers,
or fly massive,
like Afghani kites above Khabul.

I can luxuriate a while instead
a short time longer in my bed,
let thoughts of you and what you said
maintain sweet percolation in my head.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 11 months ago

This poem took me down a

This poem took me down a totally different road than I had imagined. I love when that happens... ~A "No one shall be subjected to torture or to cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment of punishment." Article 5 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 11 months ago

Very sweet and calm

I like this poem, it reminds me of painting in the bush out at Sofala where everything is sweet and calm. Thankyou Fleur
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Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

Sofala sounds great

Thanks Fleur, really glad you enjoyed this, it's about my day off I suppose, a Saturday morning when the wind intervened. Cheers Craig