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Geremia
Geremia
May 14, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

LIKE A FEATHER IN THE WIND




LIKE A FEATHER IN THE WIND

 Like a feather in the wind
Soft delicacy
And
Quiet vulnerability
Saved by its own nature
Flexibility in motion
Light and gently
Sleeping in   the breeze
No care to where the wind leads
Sweet resignation
And
Useless resistance
Able to survive
Knowing the key to its mystery
Is to  own  its destiny
Like a feather in the wind
We

 

 

 

 
— Geremia, May 14, 2009

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Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years ago

I would have been happy to have written this myself, but better

I LOVED this Longo, Ann has been singing your praises & now I can see why. Felt so connected to this one, felt like it flew straight to my heart I would have been happy to have written this myself... but all the better that you have, because I can admire it that way with the distance. Lovely ~ Anni ~~~ "A loving person lives in a loving world. A hostile person lives in a hostile world; everyone you meet is your mirror." ~Ken Keyes, Jr.
Geremia

Geremia

17 years ago

Thank yoy, Anna!

J.B. Longo-Geremia That is so kind of you. Some thngs I write are good, some notgood. I just enjoy the process, no? :) Joe
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years ago

And here I am

I sent you a comment but perhaps should write one here too. This lovely feather wafted in poetry onto the page where it can rest until the next breeze carries it on to unknown strands, and ever on to its white dreamland in infinity. Your Annuccia