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May 08, 2009
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LKE MUDDY WATERS
LIKE MUDDY WATERS Like muddy waters dank and dark Crawling slowly to Ocean’s deep Holding secrets forever to keep Lost in Water’s whirling dance I make my way to each day’s end Whirling in my own mystery again and again I know all too well secrets I dare not tell Fearing what is to be
I close my eyes and dance with my mind My soul alone to see
Those things unkind approaching me
I close my eyes and dance with my mind My soul alone to see
Those things unkind approaching me
— Geremia, May 08, 2009
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Nordic cloud
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“Like muddy waters dank
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