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JUST A MOMENTARY SPARK

JUST A MOMENTARY SPARK 

 

Where are you all now
Where did those seconds go
Words of love
Words of anger
Years that tell
Hope and despair
Care and betrayal
There and never there
Together and apart
Always on my own somehow
What was the sense of passing this way
Where is the soul
That energy
Is it in this thing they call my poetry
Do you hear how gently I sing
Your song
Do you feel my coming mortality
Are you somewhere waiting for me
One sigh to eternity
The gift of illusion
Broken fantasies
Like so many before
Just a momentary spark
Nothing less
Nothing more
— Geremia, May 01, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 1 month ago

A moementary spark creates

A moementary spark creates the beginning as it is now shall ever be, enthralled in the singularity of purpose bewildered by the sun, we fly with every word, letting go... always letting go... to Be... Much Love My Love, we fly beyond the Kyrie Eleison of this poem, into the fire of our heart's song. ~A "The way you make love is the way God will be with you." Rumi
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you. Anna

J.B. Longo-Geremia It is what it is-- or does it have to be? I wonder.
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 1 month ago

Ahhh….. the

Ahhh..... the nonduality.... ;-) How I love you, Longo...Your Gaze into the void... "The way you make love is the way God will be with you." Rumi
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orgami

17 years 1 month ago

the gulls crie the muddy waters drift in pale sky winds

the dark wing hurtling against the cloud spring fleeting through her eyes the warm breath elsewhere high atop the heights brilliant in their passion tops a great poem again Longo wishing you comfort my freind steven!
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 1 month ago

Thnks, Steven

J.B. Longo-Geremia Wishing you the same... Our poetry reveals bits and pieces of who we are. Same for all of us who write, I guess, yes? :) Joe
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 1 month ago

I love the rhythm of this one

Rocking in your joy and sorrow, your illusion and reality, rocking the rhyme along the path of life and its escaped happiness. This one is very profound. You are a spinner of magic like the rainbows, springing from the logic of the universe, your feet firmly on the ground, resolute, your poems make you never on your own, as so many others can identify with your sentiments and experiences and feel at one with them. Your Annuccia
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 1 month ago

Grazie, Annuccia

J.B. Longo-Geremia Each of us is in some way a mirror of the other. We are all of us microcosms of the whole. That is our shared humanity.