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Geremia
Geremia
Apr 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A MOMENTARY MURMUR OF ECSTACY

A momentary murmur of ecstasy

 

Its just an affair of the heart

A momentary murmur of ecstasy

I am your desire

The one that lights your fire

And when my embrace is done

I look to another one

It’s all a game

You see

Affection with no connection

A temporary  adoration

Yes

A game I heard you tell

A game you taught me well

— Geremia, Apr 26, 2009

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orgami

17 years 1 month ago

describes my Mother

abandoned me and kept my brothers (Perhaps I was too white??) and then an adopted mother exactly like my birth mother (I would find in time) abandoning to move to a better life (we were old enough yet still the sting was deadly) loved them both but caught in the poison of the lost transgression amazing how this poem falls like welcoming rain on me You weaver of delicate Magic Mr Longo!!!
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 1 month ago

SAD--BEEN THERE...

J.B. Longo-Geremia WHO KNEW Who knew that life’s journey Would take us through roads of pain and sorrow Who knew that life’s end Could be the next tomorrow. Who knew this baby crying Cried for the man he will become.