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Geremia
Geremia
Apr 18, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SILENT SPACES



Silent Spaces

 What is this silence that I fear 

 A voice that goes nowhere

 Empty echoes from star to star

 Reverberating through

 A  Universe I thought I knew

 Empty prayers from my mind

 Shouting silence in return

 No comfort in this

 Were they right

 Is He dead

 All beginnings have an end

 Or was it an invention of humanity

Suspension of disbelief

 Cosmic Trickery

 This Silence of Infinity

 


 
— Geremia, Apr 18, 2009

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Longo...

You have the gift of poetry enhanced! Excellently written questioning... thanks for posting!!!! Richard
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you

J.B. Longo-Geremia Richard, that was a WONDFERFUL and encouraging comment! Joe
yenti

yenti

17 years 1 month ago

Joe

See I said that your work was good and having read a great deal of them, I can only say that there are loads of others that are losing out on your work. There will never be a silence for you to worry about, you have an infinity of dreams and in spirit dreams are so true, but don't hasten to them they will call you when it's time. You have a lot to do yet young man, Yours Ian.T
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you, Ian

J.B. Longo-Geremia ...for that wonderful and encouraging compliment. joe