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WEEPING WILLOW

WEEPING WILLOW

 Weeping Willow tree Graceful sensuality
Tears in the wind
Alone
On a hill.But
Will
You tell me
Please
Forlorn
On summer’s
Breeze
Was your heart
Torn
Too
Sweet melancholy
Wraps a soul in pain.
But
You see
My   Weeping WIllow fr iend
Everything has a beginning
Everything has an end
 
— Geremia, Apr 06, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 2 months ago

Longo

A lovely theme and well put together, am still waiting for the happy ones lol, just joking, Yours Ian.T
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks....

J.B. Longo-Geremia Out of pain, poetry. :) Joe
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 2 months ago

Beautiful piece, love the

Beautiful piece, love the image of the weeping willow tree, always a touching portrait of pain in it's own nonchalant natural way. I esp love your ending, has a touch of optimism in the pain. The one line stanzas are different, too, but they flow really well, I was quite surprised how so. Really love it. Peace and love Katie
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Thank you, Katie

J.B. Longo-Geremia The name of the tree always fascinated mensince I was a kid-- always some sort of metaphor out there in nature... Joe
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

I am puzzled by the OOP's

With such a grace and elegance, I'm puzzled by the OOp's I may be blind or the long hanging branches of the weeping willow are getting in my face and blocking the view, their magic potions dripping into my eyes and making me dizzy. I must find my photo's of a weeping birch tree in Flatdal where the individual hanging tresses are several metres long and sway so beautifully, as you say, in the Summer breezes, with the snow still on the top of the mountain "Skorve" and the heat of Summer beating down on the flat valley and its corn fields and wooden stabburs. I used to take a little child out in a pram and when we went to the park I pushed her under the weeping willow trees and let the branches caress her face, she loved the experience. I also put her under a tree with the Autumn leaves about to drop, and then I shook the tree so that she became covered completely in leaves. Annuccia
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Oops......

J.B. Longo-Geremia I had posted forgetting to put the ending.:) Longobardolino