A CERTAIN STARE

A CERTAIN STARE They say I have this certain stare Looking straight into somewhere Enigmatic Disconcerting Nothing special Just flirting With my mystery Trying to break through Trying to see The reason for my humanity On the edge of a virtual reality Knowing yet not knowing Wondering I’ve seen that look many times before In another’s moments of clarity As she looked straight into me What is it that she wanted to say I don’t know I stare the same way

But tell me now

Who know me

What s it that you see

— Geremia, Apr 05, 2009

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Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

About this I have written a poem

What more do you want? What did you expect from me? Your Annuccia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

EDon;t recall the poem Annuccia

J.B. Longo-Geremia

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

I sent you a message

and I'm sure you will remember, they were your eyes I was talking of, if you want it posted here say so? Dear you. Anna dalla Norvegia

Kailashana

17 years 2 months ago

you see my naked soul, I am

you see my naked soul, I am not ashamed. ~A "We have to try to get rid of the notion of time. And when you have an intense contact of love with nature or another human being, like a spark, then you understand that there is no time and that everything is eternal." Paulo Coelho

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Perhaps...

J.B. Longo-Geremia trying to find one's soul in awe and wonderment and ...confusion. Grazie, Anna

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

" Not just a memory"

Your own poem says it all Longobardolino, you express jut that, steadfast and true you gaze at us in with your inner wisdom. Annuccia

infinite_dwarf

17 years 2 months ago

J.B.

I only found one nit-picky correction: 'What s it that you see' -> what is X-ray vision may not be all it's cracked up to be. All the same, awesome write. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"You can be a dreamer, you can be your dreams come true. Just let imagination lead, reality will follow through." - Michael Hedges