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Geremia
Geremia
Apr 02, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

WOLVES II: A SEQUEL

WOLVES II

 

Many wolves I have seen
 With many wolves I have been
 And
 
Looking  back
 May have even  run with the pack
 But never did I
 Try to steal a soul
 Cold and cunning as  they  Time will tell which will suffer in hell
 For the slaugher of kind and gentle hearts
 Not I

 

— Geremia, Apr 02, 2009

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

No not you

You give us your thoughts about your past and we understand from them who this 'you' is and are in agreement that it is not you who should suffer but them. Don't you think so folks? Maybe after all your soulful poems you might steal our souls even if you didn't intend to. Annuccia
Geezer

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

wolves

wolves in the sense i think you mean them are not good things,and though you ran with them, you found your way was not theirs,and left them. however i think that wolves in the true sense, are magnificent animals and deserve more respect. longo, you are a very good soul and we love your stuff. beauty is a matter of perspective. gee
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks

J.B. Longo-Geremia "Wolves" is just an archetypical metaphor for "predator sprits." I was never one. RAN WITH THE PACK was a poetic fill in , but I have known them! Joe